I see nothing but trees
Forrest and a volcano
But now there are charred remains
I always thought it couldn't happen
The once lush green forest, black as night
Steam coming from the glassy lake, while animals flee
I like your window poem a lot! Its kind of mysterious...I'm trying to figure out what window you could be looking out of. The details give the reader a really great picture in their minds!
I like your window poem a lot! Its kind of mysterious...I'm trying to figure out what window you could be looking out of. The details give the reader a really great picture in their minds!
ReplyDeleteI like this piece--you paint an interesting and vivid scene. And mysterious, like Victoria said.
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